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If we want to save the future of the planet, we will have to drastically change our way of life. what is your opinion?

#future #planet #change #life
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These days, global warming and climate
change
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 are the two main environmental concerns.
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, conserving the
Earth
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's natural
resources
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 from running out is
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 an important issue.
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, some people suggested that human being should
change
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 their lifestyle in order to save the world's
resources
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 for the
next
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 generation. I agree to some extent with the stated idea. I will support my opinion in
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 essay and bring about a few examples.
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 of all, keeping the
Earth
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's temperature at its standard level is extremely important. Consuming fossil fuels can lead to producing more greenhouse gasses and increase the risk of global warming. As a consequence, these non-renewable
resources
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 not only can approach the end but
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 may cause climate
change
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. So, human beings can reduce
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 effect by utilizing more renewable energy
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 as solar energy and wind power as the main source and
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, as alternate use of public transportation
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 of private cars for their daily commute. Another reason why I agree to
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 the way of life is that a large amount of waste being produced in different fields is hazardous to the environment. These harmful unwanted products can remain for ages in the environment and threaten various species living on
Earth
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. A good example of
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 is the majority of plastic waste, which is generated by people and factories, is non-recyclable and contaminates soil and water. Using eco-friendly shopping bags and food containers is the best way to decrease these types of contamination.
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, some people are not optimistic that doing these little things could be helpful to save the
planet
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 from disasters. Because of the limited number of critical
resources
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 to sustain life on
Earth
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, we need to discover a new
planet
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 to continue the human generation. In conclusion,
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 trying to use fewer fossil fuels and decrease the amount of waste can be a big step, I recommend them as a method of saving our
planet
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 from future disasters. Personally, I think we can save our
planet
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 by overturning previous habits which were against the environment.
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