Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and type of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.

Nowadays
people
prefer to do
things
as per their own choices and convenience.
In other words
, some
individuals
are
explorer
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an explorer
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who likes to explore new
things
wherein some
people
like to repeat the same
things
. In my opinion,
people
should do the
activities
which they
fond
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of and should be enjoying while witnessing the same.
To begin
with,
individuals
who made different choices and
likes
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like
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to explore different places, food,
activities
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and activities
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are called “Explorers”. Being an explorer is an inborn quality which somehow similar
with
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to
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the
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artistic nature.
Moreover
, they are always in search of unfamiliar places and
activities
and bring enrichment
in
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to
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their life
by
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their own way. For illustration, Travel bloggers visit
the
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distinct locations and make
the
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documentaries around them, Foodies like to tour across the globe in search of
variety
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a variety
the variety
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of food.
Thus
, explorers like to try always contrasting
activities
which brings joy in their life.
Secondly
,
individuals
who keep on repeating the
activities
,
visit
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and visit
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alike places are
an
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ordinary
individual
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individuals
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.
In other words
,
people
like to follow their monotonous life and cherish their old memories around
it
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them
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. For
instances
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instance
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, many children spend their entire summer vacation in their
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grandparent's
grand-parent’s
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grand-parent
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home. Despite that, children recognize those days as the best phase of their childhood and still cherish them.
Hence
,
individuals
like to recreate those memories which
makes
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make
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them the happiest.
As per
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my opinion,
individual
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an individual
the individual
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should make choices which makes them
the
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gleeful, positive and self-contempt.
In addition
to
this
,
individual
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individuals
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should prefer doing those
things
in which their consent is available and enjoy the utmost whether trying different
activities
or doing the same. Sometimes
individual
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an individual
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does
things
against their will and pay the cost
at
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in
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the end.
For example
: At times,
people
consumed alcohol out of peer pressure
in
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parties which
result
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results
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in sickness and constipation. To conclude, every individual is distinct from each
other
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others
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wherein their likes and dislike are
also
contrasting.
Therefore
,
people
should make their choice
as per
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their own convenience which makes them self-contempt and delighted.
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