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A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject.

#friend #course #university #advice
Dear David, I am writing to you regarding the
project
management
course
 that you may apply for
this
 semester. As you are already well-awarded I passed
this
 amazing and very practical
course
last
 semester. As an industrial engineering student, you will need
project
management
 not only for your future career but
also
this
 knowledge can help you to improve your
management
 skills and have a better understanding of how to prioritize tasks and steps with an eye on resources and time. You need to choose one of the
project
management
 software like MSP or primavera, but before that, it is highly recommended to check the issue with Dr.herbert Roth at
the
Correct article usage
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ABC university. As you may know, ABC business school is one of the well-known and high-ranked universities in the field of
project
management
 and related skills. You can easily ask for an appointment time with faculty advisors to know more about the recommended
course
, but to be on the safe side I would like to recommend you register online through their websites. below mentioned you can find their website address. www.abc-business scholl.com I believe you are making a good decision by applying for the PM
course
. Please do not hesitate to call me if you need any more details. Wish you all the best. Yours, AF
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prospective student
  • alma mater
  • curriculum
  • faculty
  • state-of-the-art
  • extramural
  • scholarly pursuits
  • cohort
  • accreditations
  • holistic development
  • pedagogy
  • thesis
  • dissertation
  • prerequisites
  • mentorship
  • application portal
  • tuition fees
  • scholarships
  • financial aid
  • internship opportunities
  • networking events
  • career services
  • personal statement
  • deadline
  • admissions office
  • recommendation letters
  • portfolio
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