The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, pollution is increasing dramatically by many factors, and it is believed that raising the
cost
of transport will be the best way to solve
this
global issue.
Although
people
may agree with
this
way, I fundamentally disagree with some aspects of
this
action. There might be several arguments in
favor
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of increasing the
cost
of
fuel
for cars and other vehicles.
First
of all, there will be some
people
who cannot afford the new price of
fuel
.
For example
, they have to pay more for petrol
then
their expenditure has to increase, and their income may not come to that expectation.
Secondly
, if the government increases the
cost
of
fuel
, there might be no change because
people
still keep using the transport for their work and study.
Consequently
, the problem has not been solved but
people
will have some difficulties in
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.
On the other hand
, the growth of
cost
in
fuel
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may have considerable benefits in reducing many types of pollution.
Initially
,
instead
of driving cars, or other vehicles,
people
will try riding bikes to improve the condition of the environment.
Secondly
,
people
will have a chance to reinvent their consumption,
for instance
, depending on their income, they will calculate the average money they should spend on
fuel
and other essential activities. To sum up, to deal with the world’s environmental problem, increasing the
cost
of
fuel
for vehicles is not the best solution, and I am strongly in
favor
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of remaining the unchanged
cost
in
this
field.
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