Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Caring

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educating

children

can be recognised as an indispensable part of

parents

’ daily life and it has been exerting profound influence in any society. Some people believe that it is necessary for each

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to receive a

course

which will render them well-prepared

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the coming parental life.

This

may be true in some cases, but I do not agree with the notion that all mothers and fathers should be required to take a parental

course

, since

this

requirement is impractical and unnecessary. In my opinion, taking

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preparation

course

is impractical in most scenarios for two main reasons.

Firstly

, it is not feasible to set

course

content since there is not a general principle that suit

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all the

children

. In fact, a certain education approach which has a positive effect on some

children

may be counterproductive to other

children

. Due to the fact that different

children

would have different personalities and opinions, they are more likely to show significantly different reactions to

the

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similar actions from

parents

, which

make

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it impossible to figure out standard conduct for parental behaviour.

In addition

, a large proportion of

parents

find it hard to have enough

time

to take

this

course

. A newborn child imposes a burden on family financial issues, including additional

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about

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milk powder, diapers and so on.

This

situation drives fathers and mothers to invest more

time

and effort in increasing income as well as taking good care of

children

;

therefore

,

parents

barely have

time

to take a parenthood preparation

course

. As well as being impractical, I would argue that taking

parental

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training

course

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courses

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is unnecessary. People can gain some effective education methods from their daily life, rather than a special training

course

. Fathers and mothers have been rearing their

children

without official guidance or formal help for thousands of years.

For instance

,

parents

can improve their caring and

educating

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level by learning from their

parents

, their friends, their errors, the specific connection with

children

and so on. The age-old practice seems to confirm that people already have some useful ways to prepare them to be great

parents

.

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to taking a

course

, those ways may have

better

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outcome

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.

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the

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mean

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time

, we cannot deny the fact that parenthood preparation training has its advantages,

such

as

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parents

a

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place where they can share some caring

experience

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. But in my opinion,

this

training should not be a requirement;

instead

, it should be an optional

course

for some

parents

who want to take it on their own accord. In conclusion, I hold the idea that we should not require all

parents

to take a training

course

for it is unwarranted.