Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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educating

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can be recognised as an indispensable part of

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’ daily life and it has been exerting profound influence in any society. Some people believe that it is necessary for each

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to receive a

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which will render them well-prepared

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the coming parental life.

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may be true in some cases, but I do not agree with the notion that all mothers and fathers should be required to take a parental

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, since

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requirement is impractical and unnecessary. In my opinion, taking

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preparation

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is impractical in most scenarios for two main reasons.

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, it is not feasible to set

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content since there is not a general principle that suit

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all the

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. In fact, a certain education approach which has a positive effect on some

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may be counterproductive to other

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. Due to the fact that different

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would have different personalities and opinions, they are more likely to show significantly different reactions to

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similar actions from

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, which

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it impossible to figure out standard conduct for parental behaviour.

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, a large proportion of

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find it hard to have enough

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to take

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course

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. A newborn child imposes a burden on family financial issues, including additional

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about

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milk powder, diapers and so on.

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situation drives fathers and mothers to invest more

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and effort in increasing income as well as taking good care of

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;

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,

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barely have

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to take a parenthood preparation

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. As well as being impractical, I would argue that taking

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training

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course

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is unnecessary. People can gain some effective education methods from their daily life, rather than a special training

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. Fathers and mothers have been rearing their

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without official guidance or formal help for thousands of years.

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,

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can improve their caring and

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level by learning from their

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, their friends, their errors, the specific connection with

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and so on. The age-old practice seems to confirm that people already have some useful ways to prepare them to be great

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.

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to taking a

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, those ways may have

better

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outcome

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.

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, we cannot deny the fact that parenthood preparation training has its advantages,

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as

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parents

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place where they can share some caring

experience

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. But in my opinion,

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training should not be a requirement;

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, it should be an optional

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for some

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who want to take it on their own accord. In conclusion, I hold the idea that we should not require all

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to take a training

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for it is unwarranted.