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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

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The pie chart illustrates the percentage of
Anthropology
students
 who had different choices after they graduated from a university. Meanwhile, the table gives us the data
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 that these
students
 got after 5 working years. It is clear that there are differences in destinations of
Anthropology
 graduates, but in general, most of them got full-time jobs after their graduation.
Besides
, the majority of
Anthropology
students
 are well paid after their 5 years’ work. The number of
Anthropology
students
 working full-time makes up
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half (52%). The figure for part-time work and unemployment section is 15% and 12%, respectively. 8% is the proportion of
students
 learning
Anthropology
 and choosing to study other majors full-time after their undergraduate course, compared to 5% of those working part-time and becoming postgraduates. There are just under one in ten (8%) of
students
 who did not know their orientation after they graduated. The
level
 of salary intended for anthropologists in private companies is relatively high. Up to 35% of them are paid from $50,000 to 74,999 while the figure for the pay band of $100,000+ is 30%. The number of graduates falling into the pay scale between $75,000-99,999 and $25,000-49,999 is 25% and 10%, respectively. Simultaneously, just 5% of
Anthropology
 graduates working
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 freelance consultants or
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 government sector are paid $25,000-49,999. The number for the
level
 of $50,000-74,999 triples to 15% for both of these sections. There are 40% of anthropologists getting the
level
 of $75,000-99,999 and $100,000+ when working in freelance consultant companies. Meanwhile, the percentage of anthropologists being
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 employees and receiving
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 salary
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 of $75,000-99,999 is 30%, and the figure for the
level
 of $100,000+ is 50%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • achieve
  • try hard
  • positive mindset
  • self-belief
  • motivates
  • ambitious goals
  • resilience
  • determination
  • confidence
  • self-esteem
  • growth mindset
  • unrealistic expectations
  • disappointment
  • failure
  • effort
  • hard work
  • seek support
  • individual differences
  • abilities
  • capabilities
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