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" Today developed countries are increasing the number of tourist industries. Why it is happening? What are the benefits of this situation?"

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I lost my brew coffee equipment. The advantages outweigh the disadvantages. There are no directions. 1. The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. 2. The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901. 3. The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced. 4. The bar shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days. 5. The table below shows the percentages of the population by age
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 in one town who rode bicycles in 2011.
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