" Today developed countries are increasing the number of tourist industries. Why it is happening? What are the benefits of this situation?"

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Introduction
I lost my brew coffee equipment.
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The advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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There are no directions.
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The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
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2. The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.
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3. The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced.
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4. The bar shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.
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Conclusion
The table below shows the percentages of the population by age
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in one town who rode bicycles in 2011.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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