You recently completed a course and youu borrowed a book from your teacher which you couldn't return in time. You would like to return the book now. Write a letter to your teacher and say: What book it was. How helpful wa the book? Explain why you couldn't return it in time.

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Dear Mrs Brown, I'm writing

this

letter to thank you for giving me the

book

for the preparation for my entrance examination.

This

was a competitive examination

book

written by Mr Gopal Kumar who is an expert in writing these types of books. The

book

name is Staff Clinical Trials with the latest 7th edition. Apparently,

this

book

contains all information that I need to know before the recruitment test. Due to it, I got 31st rank in Punjab State and have my name on the short-list made by the Recruitment Agency. Not only

this

, You'll be glad to know that I received my appointment letter today and I'll join

this

job

week. I know that I should return

this

book

last

month,

however

, I need

this

book

to prepare for my interview which was conducted the previous week by the same Recruitment agency since the short-listed candidates must pass an interview for

this

job.

Therefore

, I was unable to return it on time. I'm sure

this

has not caused any inconvenience to you. Thanks to you for the

book

one more time. Your's Sincerely, Ammy Sandhu

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