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Now in this day, we have many children using their phones and have some accounts in social media do you think this is good for them or not good explain your idea

#children #phones #accounts #media #idea
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 day, we live in an electronic age and now we can't live without him and we are using the electronic
for ever
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currently
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any one
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anyone
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 have a phone and account in
socil
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social
 media but
this
 phone
have
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 a positive and negative thing . The positive thing
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about
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the
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technology
enter
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centre
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 for many
thing
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job
 and study and you can
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talk
tolk
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talk
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anyone
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any one
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anyone
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 and any
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country
cantry
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can try
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whin
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when
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 the
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government
govenment
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government
 close the life you can spend your
time
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on
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 the phone and
for
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apply
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children can
lerin
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learn
 and watch some video it can be taught so because that should be important . The negative thing is
some
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sometimes
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time
 the technology
not
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 good for people and the children because some kids watch some bad
thing
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things
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 or bad
word
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words
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 and spent
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a lot
alot
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a lot
 of
time
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senstive
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sensitive
 and don't like to
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study
. In the
end
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using
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use
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the
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electronic
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 but caution how we should using because when
spend
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 a lot of
time
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by
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buy
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dangerous
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dangerous
this
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