In the modern era, many believe that funding for education should primarily
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on computers rather than paying
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teachingChange the verb form
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staff higher salaries. In my opinion,
teachers
are still more valuable, and
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of funds should be prioritized
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teachers
.
Firstly
, proponents argue that spending should be shifted more towards modern technology. Expertise with computers is an essential skill which helps students in their future
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as well. At present,
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focuses more on theoretical knowledge
such
as Science, History,
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, which has
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very limited usage in their future career. Though
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specialization with modern technology is a key skill which is important for survival and better opportunities
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,
this
thinking neglects the key findings in numerous studies that wide scope of knowledge is more important than early specialization.
On the contrary
, many individuals have a strong
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in
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method of teaching. In
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world, many pupils are inspired
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their
teachers
and considered them
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role
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in their lives.
Also
,
teachers
share
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emotional, intellectual, and personal
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with students which helps in motivating, providing guidance and shaping their
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in a better way.
Furthermore
, investing more funding
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teachers
results in
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hiring of more qualified
teachers
.
Additionally
,
teachers
who are passionate about their work will attract more
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towardsChange preposition
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their job.
To conclude, those who are in favour of spending more
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specialized computers are short-sighted as
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teacherFix the agreement mistake
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have
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overall impact. As qualified
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influence and
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assistance can make students reach heights in their life.
