Young people committing crimes should be treated the same as adults by the authorities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many
people
argue that adults and young people
should be treated equally in the eyes of law. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the statement and young people
should give a second
chance to learn and grow in their lives from the
past mistakes.
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Firstly
, those people
who are in favour of punishing the
young Correct article usage
apply
people
in the same way as adults will engenders
a deterring effect. The main reason for punishment is not limited to that Change the verb form
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crime
but also
a lesson for others as well not to repeat similar mistakes. As, today’s young generation is well versed with the laws and educate
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educated
them
in schools regarding the penalties, Correct pronoun usage
apply
punishment
imposed in case of committing any Correct word choice
and punishment
crime
. For instance
, social media also
play a major role in spread
awareness and consequences among Replace the word
spreading
young
generation through Correct article usage
the young
introduction
of digital helpline portals, Add an article
the introduction
Me
too movement and defamation on social media. In fact, Correct article usage
the Me
crime
rate Add an article
the crime
of
young Change preposition
among
people
has been reduced significantly as compared to the past trends. Thus
, crime
rate will increase if lack of awareness, and knowledge about the misdeeds Add an article
the crime
witnesses
among individuals.
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Secondly
, punishment for the wrong should not be the only factor but self-realisation, guilt, and chance
of being a better human being and example for others should be kept in mind while declaring the verdict. Correct article usage
the chance
However
, leniency should be shown towards pupil
basis age. To illustrate, Proper facilities should be given Fix the agreement mistake
pupils
such
as education, teaching
of skills with respect to the area of interest to re-start their lives post imprisonment. Correct word choice
and teaching
Thus
, authorities should be more considerate towards immature individuals and chances should be given to learn from their offence and re-shape the
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live
once again.
To conclude, authorities should provide ease towards Replace the word
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people
basis age and penalizing should not be the only goal perhaps set
up an example for others not to replicate the tort and another chance for improvement should be provided.Wrong verb form
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