the pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.

the pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
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The pie charts compare the
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of
electricity
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production
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using five different fuels in two separate countries in 1980 and 2000.
Overall
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,
Australia
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and
France
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both had a similar increase in total
production
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and an obvious change in each category of fuel used. In the comparison between 1980 and 2000,
Australia
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depended virtually on coal to produce
electricity
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,
while
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nuclear power was used increasingly in
France
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to do
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. Coal took the lion's share of Australian
electricity
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production
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with 50
units
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in 1980 and ballooned to 130
units
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in 2000.
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,
France
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's
electricity
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production
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, which was produced through coal, had stable figures with 25
units
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in these two years.
France
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saw a sharp increase in the quantity of
electricity
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generated by nuclear power, from only 15
units
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in 1980 to 126
units
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in 2000,
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Australia
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did not use
this
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kind of energy source. The figures
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natural gas for both nations fell dramatically to 2
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in 2000.
Electricity
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production
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by oil was moderate in these countries in 1980.
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, in 2000,
Australia
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dropped to 2
units
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,
while
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France
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rose slightly from 20 to 25
units
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words units, electricity, production, australia, france with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Electricity production
  • Fuel source
  • Renewable sources
  • Non-renewable sources
  • Significant change
  • Evolved
  • Dominant source
  • Introduction of new sources
  • Reliance
  • Electricity production mix
  • Environmental implications
  • Future trend
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