the pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.

the pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
The pie charts compare the
units
of
electricity
production
using five different fuels in two separate countries in 1980 and 2000.
Overall
,
Australia
and
France
both had a similar increase in total
production
and an obvious change in each category of fuel used. In the comparison between 1980 and 2000,
Australia
depended virtually on coal to produce
electricity
,
while
nuclear power was used increasingly in
France
to do
this
. Coal took the lion's share of Australian
electricity
production
with 50
units
in 1980 and ballooned to 130
units
in 2000.
In contrast
,
France
's
electricity
production
, which was produced through coal, had stable figures with 25
units
in these two years.
France
saw a sharp increase in the quantity of
electricity
generated by nuclear power, from only 15
units
in 1980 to 126
units
in 2000,
while
Australia
did not use
this
kind of energy source. The figures
on
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natural gas for both nations fell dramatically to 2
units
in 2000.
Electricity
production
by oil was moderate in these countries in 1980.
However
, in 2000,
Australia
dropped to 2
units
,
while
France
rose slightly from 20 to 25
units
.
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  • Electricity production
  • Fuel source
  • Renewable sources
  • Non-renewable sources
  • Significant change
  • Evolved
  • Dominant source
  • Introduction of new sources
  • Reliance
  • Electricity production mix
  • Environmental implications
  • Future trend
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