the pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
The pie charts compare the
units
of electricity
production
using five different fuels in two separate countries in 1980 and 2000.
Overall
, Australia
and France
both had a similar increase in total production
and an obvious change in each category of fuel used. In the comparison between 1980 and 2000, Australia
depended virtually on coal to produce electricity
, while
nuclear power was used increasingly in France
to do this
.
Coal took the lion's share of Australian electricity
production
with 50 units
in 1980 and ballooned to 130 units
in 2000. In contrast
, France
's electricity
production
, which was produced through coal, had stable figures with 25 units
in these two years.
France
saw a sharp increase in the quantity of electricity
generated by nuclear power, from only 15 units
in 1980 to 126 units
in 2000, while
Australia
did not use this
kind of energy source.
The figures on
natural gas for both nations fell dramatically to 2 Change preposition
for
units
in 2000. Electricity
production
by oil was moderate in these countries in 1980. However
, in 2000, Australia
dropped to 2 units
, while
France
rose slightly from 20 to 25 units
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