In the future, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think te advantages of driverless vechicles outweigh the disadvantages.?

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Nowadays technology is developing quickly with the help of artificial intelligence,

with

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and with

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the help of it automobile

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industry

industrie

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industry

is evolving rapidly. Though, in

coming

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decade it is believed that the

vehicle

will be driven without drivers, individuals will only be there as

a passengers

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passengers

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and not as drivers.

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I believe that

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phenomenon has more advantages which can overlook the negative and my argument will be justified in the ensuing paragraph. To embark on, there are several positives of

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cars.

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, it can help people to commute easily, humans who are having low reflex action can depend on

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, it is referred

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safer

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option for passengers as well as for

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pedestrians. To illustrate

this

, artificial intelligence help car

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detect

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nearby

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near by

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nearby

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object and slow down the

vehicle

which eventually prevents

from

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apply

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accidents.

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volvo

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Volvo

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automobile manufacturer recently introduced

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technology in

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car and it has received five stars

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from

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global

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new car assessment program. Apart from

this

, it was

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just

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just

a concept for a human to have

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autopilot

vehicle

which becomes reality now.

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tesla

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Tesla

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is known for its

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cars.

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vehicles

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also

considered

secure

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way to commute long journeys on

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the highway

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according to a

survey

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most accidents are caused by drivers falling asleep. It happens due to fatigue or sleepiness. Apart from

this

still

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it needs more improvement

such

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apply

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autopilot

without satellite connection as well as extending the range of a

vehicle

. In conclusion,

self driving

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self-driving

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vehicles still

needs

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need

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more development. In my opinion, if it has a moderate improvement to perfection it would be

safest

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the safest

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option for passengers to commute.

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Some people believe that nowsdays, we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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