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In the future, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think te advantages of driverless vechicles outweigh the disadvantages.?

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Nowadays technology is developing quickly with the help of artificial intelligence,
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 the help of it automobile
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industry
industrie
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industry
 is evolving rapidly. Though, in
coming
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 decade it is believed that the
vehicle
 will be driven without drivers, individuals will only be there as
a passengers
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passengers
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 and not as drivers.
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 I believe that
this
 phenomenon has more advantages which can overlook the negative and my argument will be justified in the ensuing paragraph. To embark on, there are several positives of
self driving
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self-driving
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 cars.
Firstly
, it can help people to commute easily, humans who are having low reflex action can depend on
autopilot
.
Secondly
, it is referred
as
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safer
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a safer
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 option for passengers as well as for
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pedestrians. To illustrate
this
, artificial intelligence help car
to
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apply
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detect
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nearby
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near by
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nearby
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 object and slow down the
vehicle
 which eventually prevents
from
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accidents.
For Example
,
volvo
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Volvo
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a
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 automobile manufacturer recently introduced
this
 technology in
it's
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 car and it has received five stars
by
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from
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global
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the global
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 new car assessment program. Apart from
this
, it was
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just
jst
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just
 a concept for a human to have
a
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an
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autopilot
vehicle
 which becomes reality now.
For example
,
tesla
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Tesla
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it
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is known for its
autopilot
 cars.
Moreover
,
autopilot
 vehicles
is
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are
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also
 considered
secure
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a secure
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 way to commute long journeys on
highway
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the highway
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.
Additionally
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 according to a
survey
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,survey
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 most accidents are caused by drivers falling asleep. It happens due to fatigue or sleepiness. Apart from
this
,
still
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 it needs more improvement
such
 as
,
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apply
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autopilot
 without satellite connection as well as extending the range of a
vehicle
. In conclusion,
self driving
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self-driving
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 vehicles still
needs
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need
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 more development. In my opinion, if it has a moderate improvement to perfection it would be
safest
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the safest
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 option for passengers to commute.
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