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Band 8

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend told you recently that he/she had gone to an excellent restaurant. You wonder if this restaurant will be suitable for your birthday party next week. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend about your planned party ask what the restaurant is called and for directions to get there ask what kind of food it serves and if your friend has any particular recommendations from the menu You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Pat

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Dear Pat, It was great to hear from you
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 week and
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 about an amazing experience you had at a restaurant you went to with your family. I wondering if I could get some more details about that place since I was planning to celebrate my birthday and I think it could just be the right spot. I'm turning 22 next week and I'd like my party to be at a restaurant where I can find delicious food options and an enjoyable ambience.
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, I just plan on inviting close friends
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 time. Since my birthday is on Friday, I want to book a table as soon as possible. I'd like to know the restaurant's name and how to get there. An address or an important landmark would definitely make my life easy!
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, what variety of cuisines does the place offer?
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, please suggest anything that you think is worth trying. I am really excited to have something different and try new recipes! I hope to see you soon and please try to be there on my birthday! Best wishes, Lavin.

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task achievement
Consider providing more specific details about what you are planning for your birthday to make the opening more engaging.
coherence cohesion
You could improve coherence by linking your questions more clearly with the context.
task achievement
The letter successfully explains the situation and clearly asks for detailed information about the restaurant.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are well-structured, creating a friendly tone suitable for writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph focuses on a specific point, making it easy to follow.
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