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Tourism is always a force for good which enables people of different countries to understand each other. To what extend do you agree with this idea?

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In
fact
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tourism
 industry has been playing an important role in nations` understanding
toward
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 each other around the world. I absolutely agree that
this
 trend has benefits for all people as well as governments.
First
 of all, when visitors come to
host
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country
 and expose to the stunning historical places and amazing
sight-seeing
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 of that
country
, they are highly likely to change their misunderstanding that they have from the past data.
That is
,
this
 cognition not only
encourage
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 them to come to
this
 region more, but it
also
 makes them
to
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respect
to
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this
 nation`s culture and religion. Take my
home land
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homeland
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 –Iran- which does not have
international
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an international
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 positive name in the world as an example; the more tourists know
Iran`s
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 great civilization, the more they tend to build
long-term
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friendship
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friendships
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 with
Iranian
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Iranians
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.
As a result
,
that is
 an effective way to clear our intentions and facilitate cultural exchange with other nations across the globe which means globalization.
In addition
, some tourists and
tourism
 companies after purchasing goods from a
country
 go to the other countries and introduce those products to the other areas as well, so we can gain a big benefit from selling our merchandise.
This
 results
to
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 a wealthy
country
 which affects
on
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all aspects of our life.
For instance
, according to estimations in Australia, more than one billion money is annually obtained by
tourism
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 industry. It is difficult to conceive of vigorous economic growth without an efficient
tourism
 industry. To conclude,
although
 because of our religious beliefs my
home land
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homeland
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 has
isolated
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 in the world to some
extend
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, I believe by absorbing visitors from other places we are able to introduce our culture and precious resources respectfully to
the
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other nations.
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