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Pollution of air, water and soil has become critical in last years and it takes millions of years to recoup. What are the main causes of pollution? How can we tackle this problem individually and globally?

#pollution #air #water #soil #years #millions
Over the
last
 years, our planet has
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experience
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 a long list of environmental pollution problems that million years will be taken to compensate
the
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 resulted consequences. I am certainly
on
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 the opinion that human activities for extending their own life and scientific capabilities are the major contributions to these
disastres
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disasters
. In
this
 essay, several individual and global solutions will be elucidated. On the one hand, using
plastic made
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 materials, which have been produced by
manufactures
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 owing to
its
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 cost-
efective
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effective
 nature,
likely
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 to be
most
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 important contribution to pollution problems. Since
plastic
 materials cannot decompose and become a part of the environment, they have a detrimental effect on the area where they are discarded.
On the other hand
,
an
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enormous
vehicle
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 have been
producing
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 by car factories led to
release
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a
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huge amount of fuel combustion
to
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 the air. These harmful
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carbon based
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 gases bring
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severe
several
sevelar
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severe
 consequences for our planet
for instance
ozun
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ozone
 layer depletion and so forth.
However
, I believe that government and individuals both have a
responsibilities
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 to address these issues.
Firstly
 harshly fines should be legislated
to
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 the
manufactures
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 and any other
campanies
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companies
are
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 contributing to air pollution.
Similarly
, several laws should be passed so
that
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penalize the use of
plastic
in
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all over the world.
Such
 laws need to be implemented
an
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 a national level and immediate steps should be taken by the central government to address
this
 situation. To conclude, based on what has
mentioned
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thus
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for
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,
plastic
 usage and fuel
combustions
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 were introduced as
major
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source
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 of our
planet
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pollutions
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pollution
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, and two strict
solution
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 that should be passed by central governments were proposed.
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