The government should spend money on trains than roads To what extent do you agree or disagree

To start with, means of transportation is important for easy buying and selling amongst other countries. Government spending funds on

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the train

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train

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trains

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is of more benefit than

roads

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on roads

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. With

this

traffic

conjunction and

air

pollution

will reduce drastically. In

this

,

essay

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I will express my opinion with some points.

Firstly

, spending funds on

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the train

a train

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train

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trains

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will reduce much

traffic

on the highway ,

this

immensely will make most individuals not

to

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transport themselves with their private vehicles.

For example

, in Australia

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of

railway

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is more convenient and very much affordable.

Also

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this

avoids the frequent occurrence of accidents all because

of

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people are eager to reach their destinations without being patient.

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,

this

will benefit

to

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those individuals that trek .most times, due to the

traffic

some

motorcycle

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motorcycles

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who are impatient

drives

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towards the walkway just to avoid the

traffic

jam thereby creating more harm and inconveniences for road trekkers.

Secondly

, the

use

of

railway

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will reduce noise and

air

pollution

within communities.

also

, automotive will be reduced in other to

alleviated

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traffic

and

air

pollution

. Most people will stop the

use

of private cars and

this

will minimize

pollution

because of

it

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affordable cost. ,

Furthermore

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there will

less

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expenses in purchasing gas and individuals will save more. Reducing

pollution

within the communities will improve their health because inhalation of bad gas that spread into the

air

will be minimized at a lengthy point. In conclusion,

use

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of

railway

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the railway

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is more convenient and

less

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fewer

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expenses

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. It will

further

reduce

much

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traffic

jam

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jams

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and

also

save people's lives from

accident

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accidents

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and injuries .