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Scientist say that future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think it is a positive or a negative social development?

#scientist #future #humanity #language #development
Scientists are the one who is doing
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 of research and they are capable of making
invention
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that is
 fruitful for the future.
However
, I don't think
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people
 will rely on any specific
language
 in the coming years. There are
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 of reasons to support my notion.
First
 and
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foremost
for most
formost
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foremost
,
people
 will face difficulties in talking to the person when he or she is in foreign
countries
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.The other person might get baffled and he will not be able to understand anything.
Second
, when the situation is critical
people
 might get in trouble if they don't speak
other
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another language
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language
.
Furthermore
, In order to study in foreign countries or to settle there,one has to learn and understand their
language
 to get accustomed
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variety
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 of
people
 and places. as they have to fully
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 their skills to speak
globally
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the globally
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 accepted
language
 like English.
On the contrary
 side,
scientist
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a scientist
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 has made
the
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tool which
enable
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 us to speak in our mother
language
 and
people
 of different regions can understand it precisely.
Also
, there are various apps and websites which interpret our words in different languages. Somehow it will be possible that humanity will speak
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the similar
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language
 in the future. To conclude, I opine that it is essential to learn
different
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dialect
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. As it will increase our knowledge and experience.
Moreover
, various
dialect
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 will boost our confidence and we can speak without any hesitation.
Submitted by Uday patel on

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