You had borrowed money from your friend when you were facing some financial problems and forgot to pay it back. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter: Apologize for being late in returning the money Explain what happened Say how you are going to fix the issue now

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Dear Sagar, I am writing

this

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letter to apologize to you for not paying your

money

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back on time, which I have taken on June 4th the due date was July 4th and the amount was $2000. I have taken that

money

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for my course as you know I am taking music classes which will help my career.

Firstly

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, I planned to give you cash on time but unfortunately, I lost my job because of covid as I work in the restaurant it was closed for 4 weeks due to government regulations.

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, it was very hard to survive somehow I tried to make

money

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with my music classes which were enough for my room rent and grocery. At the moment I am trying to solve the issue as my restaurant started working and I am working extra hours to clear your debt, apart from that I am

also

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teaching music classes so I just need two more weeks to pay your

money

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. Hoping positive response from you. Best regards, Karan.

mummanenikaranWed Aug 03 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

171 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

financial hardship
unintended oversight
profoundly regretful
amicable resolution
irreplaceable support
repayment schedule
heartfelt gratitude
unwavering patience
promptly address
sincerely apologize

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