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the percentage of overweight children in western societies has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the possible causes and effects of this disturbing trend and offer a solution.

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The line graph indicates how many
tourists
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 visited a particular Caribbean
island
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 and where they lived in a period of seven
years
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: 2010 to 2017 Overall,
this
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island
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 welcomed more
tourists
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 over the period shown. Staying on
island
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 was more prevalent than staying on
cruise
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ships
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 from 2010 to 2015 but the pattern reversed in the
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 two
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.
Initially
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, 1
million
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tourists
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 set their footprints on
this
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island
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. Despite a stability from 2015 to 2016, there was a relatively steady rise in the quantity of
tourists
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 paying visits to the
island
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 to 3.5
million
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 in 2017. As for their accommodations, in 2010, three quarters of the total of
tourists
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 dwelled on
island
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 and the rest lived on
cruise
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ships
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. During the
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 five consecutive
years
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,
tourists
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 preferred staying on
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 to on
cruise
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ships
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 . To specify, the figure for the former accommodation rose to a high point of 1.5
million
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 in 2013 and stabilized in the following 2
years
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. That of the latter type, after some fluctuations, kept rising to approximately 1.3
million
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 in 2015.
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, in the
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 2
years
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: 2016 and 2017, staying on
cruise
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ships
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 outnumbered living on
island
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, with the figures reaching 2 and 1.5
million
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.
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