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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

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In the coming up
era
, neither printed newspapers nor
books
 become the prior options for many
people
. Because of the birth as well as the development of many new technological inventions,
people
 are allowed to approach new horizons without any payment. In
this
 essay, I would suppose that there are a variety of advantages being brung with by
the
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digital media and
also
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First
 of all, it can be seen obviously that
people
 these days acknowledge
the
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new inventions and use them as an essential part of
human's
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 daily life. Not only for teaching and working
,
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technological advances
also
 serve personal needs. These could range from shopping online, and chatting, to browsing websites for
news
 and reading online
books
. Turning back to the
era
 when there
were
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not
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the
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appearance of digital inventions,
people
 in those times had to invest a large quantity of their financial budget for owning
books
 and newspapers. And sometimes, waiting for the release of new episodes became part of their life. But nowadays, with the development of technological platforms, there is no longer the existence of readers' delayed time.
Instead
, they are allowed to access various websites to browse
news
 and read online
books
 anytime they want without any obstacles of time. And
moreover
, the
news
 can be published directly
to
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 the internet. In that way, the publishers do not invest essentially their money
for
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 printing
books
 and newspapers which are old-fashioned in
this
era
.
In addition
, by using digital advances,
people
 can save their budget for other personal purposes as well as
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 the environment.
Instead
 of buying paper-based
books
 and
news
,
people
 can invest their budget for either a smartphone or a computer which is useful in serving the
people
's reading purpose in the long term. These technological devices provide flexibility and convenience for users.
Additionally
, with the development of digital advances,
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businesses are no longer urged to deforest which aims to make wooden resources for
books
 and newspaper manufacturing. To conclude,
the
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paper-based
books
 and
news
 are gradually becoming old-fashioned, And in the near
era
, technological platforms will become the prior choices for many
people
 so as to comfort their reading needs.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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