You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter: Introduce yourself Explain what experience and special skills you have Explain why you are interested in the job

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to apply for a job which I saw in your post in the newspaper.
Firstly
, Myself Rohit Pawar and currently living in dhayri, Pune 41 which is very near to your shop. If you hire me, I will be available for maximum time in the
company
and will provide my best on duty to get profit to our
company
. I am a very experienced person,
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lot of knowledge about driving the correct method and how to grab the customer to our organization. Good
skill
in product selling to earn the best margin and to suggestive selling that
skill
, I can bring to your organization as well as I will share that
skill
to other members for following that process.
Lastly
, to get good and expand my knowledge and
skill
with other
company
also
my previous
company
shop is too far from my current address which not able to travel. I studied about your
company
and I found that
this
is a multi-brand
company
and I saw my future in your organization owing to that very interested to apply. Looking to your positive response. Yours faithfully, Rohit Pawar
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