You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter: Introduce yourself Explain what experience and special skills you have Explain why you are interested in the job

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to apply for a job which I saw in your post in the newspaper.

Firstly

, Myself Rohit Pawar and currently living in dhayri, Pune 41 which is very near to your shop. If you hire me, I will be available for maximum time in the

company

and will provide my best on duty to get profit to our

company

. I am a very experienced person,

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with a

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lot of knowledge about driving the correct method and how to grab the customer to our organization. Good

skill

in product selling to earn the best margin and to suggestive selling that

skill

, I can bring to your organization as well as I will share that

skill

to other members for following that process.

Lastly

, to get good and expand my knowledge and

skill

with other

company

also

my previous

company

shop is too far from my current address which not able to travel. I studied about your

company

and I found that

this

is a multi-brand

company

and I saw my future in your organization owing to that very interested to apply. Looking to your positive response. Yours faithfully, Rohit Pawar

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