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Some people prefer activities and lifestyles in hot climates while others prefer ‎activities and lifestyles in cold climates. Discuss both views and give your ‎opinion‎

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People around the globe have different preferences regarding weather conditions. Some people chose live in places, where the climate is hot, others prefer regions with a cold climate. In
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 will conclude with my point of view on
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 with, societies which are located in warm countries are more reliable and have a more active lifestyle in comparison with those who are living in a cold cold countries. Their body health and immune system are more durable due to the opportunities, which are available in warm countries.
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, there are too many sports activities
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 as swimming, diving, cycling etc available, which help individuals to avoid illnesses or overcome them easily due to their health flexibility.
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, inhabitants of the cold parts of the world, are less faced with illnesses which were spread in the hottest parts. The reason for that, many viruses are not capable to be active in the coolest climate conditions.
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, it should be noted, that communities which spent their sufficient part of life in cold weather do have not the strongest immune system to the viruses which come from immigrants. It is very hard for them to struggle with diseases from different origins.
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, locals should wear too many layers of clothes in order to avoid fatal problems originating from the lowest temperatures.
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, they are more restricted in their daily life activities. In conclusion, I personally believe that features which offer us warm conditions are better for individuals, not only in terms of health but
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 in their activity diversity because the pros of severe weather are like a double-edged sword when advantages meanwhile might be disadvantes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • hot climates
  • cold climates
  • surfers
  • beach volleyball
  • swimming
  • laid-back lifestyle
  • winter sports
  • skiing
  • snowboarding
  • ice skating
  • picturesque landscapes
  • hiking
  • extended daylight hours
  • physical fitness
  • social gatherings
  • discipline
  • cultural events
  • individual lifestyle choices
  • personal comfort
  • outdoor-oriented
  • adventure-filled experiences
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