Nowadays, more university students choose to study some practical subjects (such as Marketing and Information Technology (1) instead of theoretical subjects (such as economics and mathematics). Some people suggest that universities should focus on practical subjects, not theoretical subjects. Do you agree or not agree?

University is a place to allow people to learn high-level knowledge. Some people think that practical
subjects
are more important than theoretical
subjects
. In my opinion, I completely disagree with
this
. On the one hand, the theory is very important in
practice
, because all have connections,
such
as scientists think that H5N1 comes from chickens,
then
they should find out how to save others from chickens. When students only focus on practicals, there are a lot of theories that can’t build up.
Moreover
, philosophy can help to build up logical thinking which is very necessary and help us to solve problems. So, if they learn that, it is a benefit from
this
training.
On the other hand
, learning the theory can allow students to know how the
practice
comes from
then
they can learn it quickly and easily.
For example
, when we know the math formats , we can know how to do other. So, we can see that theory is good for
practice
and
that is
very useful for our life or work.
Therefore
, we need to learn the
practice
to allow us how to tell others what we learn to make them understand. And it is one of the major trends around the world that we need to know more
.
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In conclusion, I think universities not only allow students to learn practical
subjects
but
also
them to study practical
subjects
.
Therefore
, both academic and empiric
subjects
are worth continuing in students’ curriculums.
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