WRITING TASK 2 1. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. 2. You should write at least 250 words. Technologies like AI and Robotics are automating many human jobs and helping to maximize company profits. However, this may result in a new wave of mass unemployment and government should step in to regulate these fields. Discuss arguments for both sides and give your opinion.
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The
current era Change preposition
In the
known
as Add the auxiliary verb
is known
technology
and a lot of steps have taken ahead, AI and Robots are doing every Add an article
the technology
a technology
work
which human can do that Human intervention require less, Thus
, so much unemployment has increased globally but companies getting huge profit. We are going to discuss both side
in the following paragraph and I will give my opinion in the conclusion.
On the one side, Change to a plural noun
sides
technology
has grown rapidly in every sector like a factory, mining and many more places due to that every work
can complete before the time line
. So, companies or factories get a lot of benefits from using robots and artificial intelligence. Correct your spelling
timeline
For example
, humans are not able to work
in dip mining area or hot factory place their robot can stand and do human work
without losing human lives. Moreover
, countries' economies are getting stronger and able to export products or things to other countries country
which is good for our economy to bring a dollar and contribute to our country
.
On the other side, richer become rich and the poor are remained
poor because no more requirements for employees which big question mark in front of the government. Change to the active voice
remain
have remained
For instance
, In the US country
, their now few companies have started to use
the
robot to Correct article usage
apply
delivering
customer orders at Wrong verb form
deliver
doorstep
due to the unemployment rate had increased. Correct article usage
the doorstep
Furthermore
, people are fighting for their primary needs like food, shelter and clothes, so governments have to restrict to use
of technology
. Likewise
, where
is a problem with human life company can Correct your spelling
there
use
technology
to avoid accidents and major issues.
To conclude, Government needs more control over employment no human can fight for his needs. I am in Change the punctuation
?
favor
of, less Change the spelling
favour
use
of technology
and more focus on employment to control Add an article
the country
country
economy in a better way.Change noun form
country's
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