You ordered an item from an online store and it has arrived damaged. Write a letter to the retailer to complain. In the letter: - Explain why you are unhappy - Request a refund - Make arrangements to return the damaged item
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to complain about the last
camera
I purchased from your store
On 14 of October I purchased the camera
after a long wait of two weeks.
I am a constant customer of your store
I have been purchasing many products from your store
, in this
case, I surprised when I received the package the camera
damaged the equipment is unable to fix it moreover
, the camera
was not the same brand as I ordered online it was extremely different and also
I ordered a bag for the camera
and still not delivered.
I would like to request you take action on this
matter and kindly I ask you to refund my money as your policy if the products are damaged should I refund my money moreover
, I want to cancel the bag that has still yet not delivered. I am going to reverse courier for the damaged camera
to your store
so kindly I ask you to pay charges for me whin
24 hours.
Yours sincerely,Correct your spelling
within
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coherence cohesion
Make sure each paragraph presents a distinct idea or point. The current structure combines multiple points in a single paragraph.
coherence cohesion
Try to logically organize your complaint by first stating the issue, then the request for a refund, followed by the return arrangements, giving each a clear paragraph of its own.
task achievement
Fully address all three bullet points in the task, ensuring that each request is given adequate explanation and detail.
task achievement
Maintain a polite and formal tone throughout the letter; avoid using phrases that might come across as too casual or commanding.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite