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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents choosing to self-educate their children at home rather then sending them to school. Do the advantages of home education outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, there is a tendency in different countries to provide
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a
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home
 education
instead
 of
the
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apply
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school
one
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apply
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for
children
. While studying at
home
 often leads to better
results
 and low risk of social damage to a kid, poor planning
skills
 and poor
communication
 experience are drastically more important
results
 of the
school
avoidence
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avoidance
. Studying at
home
 allows
children
 to perform better due to an ability to spend more time
on
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working.
For example
, there is no reason to go to
school
, so
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studying
studing
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studying
 at
home
 kids don't have to
spent
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 time
on
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travelling,
therefore
, they could be less tired and be able to study harder every day.
This
 usually leads to higher marks and better
results
 on tests,
thus
,
children
 learn better.
Moreover
,
lack
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 of the tough surrounding
of
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 the
school
 might help not to be mentally harmed. There are usually bullies at schools who torture weaker kids and damage their growing
mind
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minds
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 and mental health by gaslighting,
for instance
.
Hence
,
unnessecity
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unnecessity
 of living among
of
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peers prevents potential mental damage.
On the other hand
,
lack
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a lack
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 of
the
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independence from
parential
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parental
 control may prevent or cancel the development of planning
skills
.
Vast
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 majority of
the
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parents
does
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do
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 not give a child a chance to choose what to study
,
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 but
makes
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make
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 plans and timetables for him or
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her
fer
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her
instead
 of his or her choices. In future,
children
 may not be able to choose
his
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or
her
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their
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 own path and would meet problems with arranging a schedule.
Furthermore
, avoiding contact with classmates or a teacher could destroy
a
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communication
 potential of
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the student
a student
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student
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students
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. Because of the scarcity of
the
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communication
 with any people
such
skills
 might stagnate and regress, in long-term perspective preventing any clear
communication
 to occur,
for instance
. To conclude, soft
skills
as
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communication
 and planning are the most valuable
results
 from the
school
 years than any knowledge in raw comparison,
therefore
,
drawbacks
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the drawbacks
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 of
home
 education outweigh its benefits.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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