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Many companies are moving to the countryside instead of staying in large cities. What are the advantages of this trend?

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The maps illustrate Happy Valley Shopping
Center
 in 1982 and 2012. Overall, the
center
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 underwent significant changes. Some buildings were demolished, but many new ones appeared.
Moreover
, some facilities were relocated. In 1982, there was a coffee shop
in
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 the corner of the shopping
center
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 with a food store near it. On the right, three stores (sports, electronics, and furniture) were situated. In another
corner
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 toilets were located with an elevator
next
 to it.
Furthermore
, in the middle of Happy Valley Shopping
Center
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 there was an entertainment area and a lobby area.
In addition
, there was a lake to the left of the building and a road leading to the entrance with several trees near it. In 2012, the
center
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 was extended, some trees were chopped-down and the road was replaced with a parking lot. The lake was removed and
a
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furniture retail appeared
on
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 its place. The coffee shop was flattened, while the sports store and the electronics one were moved and the theme restaurants were constructed in their place. The furniture store was
also
 knocked-down and replaced with
the
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 food shop.
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