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Of all public transportations, a metro is the most convenient way to get around a large city. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Transport is
one
 of the essential services in a city.
Metro
 is
one
 of
a
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 modern ways which is full filling
people
's transportation needs. Even though there are lots of transportation media, the
metro
 is
one
 of the best ways that
people
 can use. I agree with
this
 statement and I will prove my opinion in
this
 essay.
Metro
 is a large vehicle which can carry many
people
 once at a time. Most of the time large cities are always crowded especially in the mornings, afternoons and evenings. If all the
people
 come to the city by their own vehicles it may cause heavy traffic jams.
This
 will leads to environmental issues like air pollution, and sound pollution. But using the
metro
,
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helps to reduce the need for individual transport and encourages
people
 to use public transport. The gathering of
people
 is
also
one
 reason that
metro
 becomes more convenient. Other than that, the
metro
 is a very fast, comfortable medium of transportation.
People
 do not need to think about driving and
this
 will be helped to reduce accidents
also
. Apart from the above reasons the
metro
 doesn't bother about the disturbances made by other vehicles because it has a separate mode to travel. In conclusion, I agree with
this
 statement regarding the above facts mentioned.
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