Films and computers games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have negative effect on society and should be banned. Others say they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is a popular trend that with the fast progress of

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society

, some

violence

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plots are added

into

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films and

computer

games

.

This

situation heated a discussion, some

people

held conventional opinions that it has many bad influences, but an escalating category of

people

prefer to think it is harmless which I totally agree with. In the following essay, my contention will be

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scrutinized.

To begin

with, it is widely known that the forms of art change constantly in order to adapt

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development of the era.

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is because

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the

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different specific time, the theme of the

society

is different which

lead

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to different demands of

people

.

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reflection of the characteristics of The Times. An eminent example of

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is in the Renaissance era, many masters changed their painting or writing styles from praising the god and the church

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celebrating the greatness of

people

such

as Raphael and Michelangelo.

Therefore

, in

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modern

society

, more and more informative technologies are invented and the fast pace of

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life

give

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people

much

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more pressure than before. So watching some

violence

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pictures can release stress and help

people

adapt to

this

fast-changing

society

.

However

,

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some conventional

opinion

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opinions

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say that too much

violence

is not good for

people

’s mental health. To illustrate

this

,

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some occasions,

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individuals who are obsessed with

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those kinds of film or

computer

games

are tend

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to have

propensity

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a propensity

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for

violence

.

This

will contribute to more crimes and cause social instability.

Moreover

, without too

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restrictions, teenagers can easily find the resources

of

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the

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violent films and

computer

games

.

This

will definitely influence their mental health due to

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immature mind.

Thus

, it is important for managers to implement some measures and policies to partly limit

people

’s

behavior

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especially

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some limitations for the youth. In conclusion, after

this

essay has manifested the above-mentioned points, I can reiterate that I believe that watching films and playing

computer

games

which contain

violence

are

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the trend

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trend

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of

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this

society

and can help

people

relax. But these

behaviors

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must be under control,

otherwise

, there will be more crimes and bad influences on

people

’s mental health.