Films and computers games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have negative effect on society and should be banned. Others say they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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society
, some
violence
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plots are added
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films and
computer
games
.
This
situation heated a discussion, some
people
held conventional opinions that it has many bad influences, but an escalating category of
people
prefer to think it is harmless which I totally agree with. In the following essay, my contention will be
further
scrutinized.
To begin
with, it is widely known that the forms of art change constantly in order to adapt
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development of the era.
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different specific time, the theme of the
society
is different which
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to different demands of
people
.
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reflection of the characteristics of The Times. An eminent example of
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is in the Renaissance era, many masters changed their painting or writing styles from praising the god and the church
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celebrating the greatness of
people
such
as Raphael and Michelangelo.
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, in
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modern
society
, more and more informative technologies are invented and the fast pace of
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life
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people
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more pressure than before. So watching some
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pictures can release stress and help
people
adapt to
this
fast-changing
society
.
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,
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some conventional
opinion
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opinions
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say that too much
violence
is not good for
people
’s mental health. To illustrate
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some occasions,
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individuals who are obsessed with
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those kinds of film or
computer
games
are tend
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tend
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to have
propensity
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a propensity
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for
violence
.
This
will contribute to more crimes and cause social instability.
Moreover
, without too
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restrictions, teenagers can easily find the resources
of
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violent films and
computer
games
.
This
will definitely influence their mental health due to
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immature mind.
Thus
, it is important for managers to implement some measures and policies to partly limit
people
’s
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especially
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some limitations for the youth. In conclusion, after
this
essay has manifested the above-mentioned points, I can reiterate that I believe that watching films and playing
computer
games
which contain
violence
are
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of
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this
society
and can help
people
relax. But these
behaviors
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must be under control,
otherwise
, there will be more crimes and bad influences on
people
’s mental health.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • violence
  • negative impact
  • aggressive behavior
  • desensitization
  • societal norms
  • restrictions
  • censorship
  • leisure activity
  • harmless entertainment
  • stress relief
  • virtual reality
  • freedom of expression
  • moderation
  • self-regulation
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