Young people who commit serious crimes, such as rubbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that there are more and more

crimes

committed by young

people

and have bad influences on society. To solve

this

growing problem, an escalating category of

people

, nowadays, try to seek solutions and some of them think those young

criminals

should be punished like

adults

.

By contrast

, I discern young

criminals

should be educated and

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punished less. In the following essay, my contention will be

further

scrutinized.

To begin

with, it is widely known that compared to

adults

, young

people

have

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mind

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and

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so

this

is more like a moral problem rather than

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issue. In most juvenile cases, because of

bad

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growing environment and lack of education, those young

criminals

have no consciousness of laws and do not know where is

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of legal which means they even do not know they have committed. So if they are punished like

adults

, it can have a serious impact on their physical and mental health and they will breed more evil thoughts. When they are released from prison, it is likely for them to commit

crimes

again.

Therefore

, in order to solve

this

issue,

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trial is no longer the most useful weapon.

By contrast

, more morals should be added and more legal publicity is

also

important.

Furthermore

, young offenders should be given

second

chance. To illustrate

this

, in many countries, there are many kinds of laws to protect minors.

For instance

, in China, young

criminals

are sent to

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juvenile prison rather than staying with

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adult

criminals

who can teach

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more criminal techniques.

However

, in

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juvenile prison, they can get

education

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. The living and food conditions are much better in the

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. In

this

way, they can turn over a new leaf

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their lives.

Thus

, as long as young offenders are educated well and

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punished just the right amount, they will be grateful to

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and thankful for

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giving them a

second

chance to go back to

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normal society.

In addition

, a more tolerant society leads to less crime. In conclusion, after

this

essay has manifested the above-mentioned points, I can reiterate that I believe that young

people

who commit serious

crimes

should not be punished like

adults

. They should be educated and given a

second

chance. As not only

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this

way is good for their mental and physical health, but it can

also

reduce

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crimes

in the future.

Hence

, I argue that governments should implement more laws to protect

young

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the young

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criminal

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and the public should

also

treat those young

people

equally.