Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write not less than 250 words.

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language

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become an integral part of education and

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make

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certain professionals

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think that elementary school

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institution is the appropriate level to start learning different

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own merits and demerits,

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, I think the advantages surpass the drawbacks because there will be easy and fast assimilation of the

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future career opportunities. To start with, understanding

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nonnative

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is easier and faster at

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age

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life. The reason

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that, children's

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are still fresh at

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they don't have much of concerns that will hinder assimilation. To illustrate, a survey carried out by Illinois Advisory Council on bilingual education (IACBE) revealed that 90% of

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who

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proficient

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started the training at

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age

.

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, it is more beneficial to tutor young ones

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foreign

languages

at primary school.

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we can not overlook the disadvantage

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as confusion that comes with learning various

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in childhood,

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children that are experts from early childhood with different

languages

outside their own mother's tongue will be exposed to more varieties of job opportunities in later life.

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is because most

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multi-billion international organization associates with people from cultural

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and

this

make them

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prefer employees who are fluent

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different

languages

,

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it will be of advantage for an individual with

such

skill to get employed in

such

company

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with higher salaries. Take

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instance, my maternal uncle just got

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employment with an international company in France, and from what he told me ,he was able to

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this

work because of the

varieties

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of

languages

he can speak fluently which he had learnt from childhood.

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,

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a juvenile

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juvenile

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who become bilingual from

young

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age

will benefit from

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job

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in the future. To conclude

with

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,

although

confusion is the drawback that results from multilingual training at primary school,

nonetheless

, the benefits which are quick and easy comprehension of the

language

and exposure to better future work

opportunity

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outweigh the demerit.