Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write not less than 250 words.

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language
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become an integral part of education and
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make
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certain professionals
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think that elementary school
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of
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institution is the appropriate level to start learning different
languages
.
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own merits and demerits,
nevertheless
, I think the advantages surpass the drawbacks because there will be easy and fast assimilation of the
language
,
also
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future career opportunities. To start with, understanding
of
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nonnative
language
is easier and faster at
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the early
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age
of
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life. The reason
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that, children's
brain
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are still fresh at
this
age
they don't have much of concerns that will hinder assimilation. To illustrate, a survey carried out by Illinois Advisory Council on bilingual education (IACBE) revealed that 90% of
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adult
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adults
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who
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proficient
bilingual
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started the training at
younger
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a younger
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age
.
Therefore
, it is more beneficial to tutor young ones
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foreign
languages
at primary school.
Furthermore
,
although
we can not overlook the disadvantage
such
as confusion that comes with learning various
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in childhood,
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children that are experts from early childhood with different
languages
outside their own mother's tongue will be exposed to more varieties of job opportunities in later life.
This
is because most
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the
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multi-billion international organization associates with people from cultural
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and
this
make them
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prefer employees who are fluent
with
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different
languages
,
therefore
it will be of advantage for an individual with
such
skill to get employed in
such
company
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with higher salaries. Take
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instance, my maternal uncle just got
an
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employment with an international company in France, and from what he told me ,he was able to
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this
work because of the
varieties
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variety
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of
languages
he can speak fluently which he had learnt from childhood.
Therefore
,
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a juvenile
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juvenile
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juveniles
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who become bilingual from
young
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age
will benefit from
better
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a better
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job
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jobs
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in the future. To conclude
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,
although
confusion is the drawback that results from multilingual training at primary school,
nonetheless
, the benefits which are quick and easy comprehension of the
language
and exposure to better future work
opportunity
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opportunities
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outweigh the demerit.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cognitive abilities
  • pronunciation
  • self-conscious
  • cultural awareness
  • global society
  • proficiency levels
  • competitive job market
  • foundational skills
  • qualified teachers
  • recreational activities
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