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As languages such as English, Spanish and Mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a fear that many minority languages may die out. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages.

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There is no doubt that these days some
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 become more widely spoken. The question is, is it necessary that some countries are afraid
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 spreading these
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 and they must protect their own
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? In
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 taken serious steps to protect their
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. The main reason given to support
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languages
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 have a vast history and social links,some governments fear the extinction of their
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. To illustrate, the government of Saudi Arabia have taken good steps to protect their Arabic
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 by putting a day to celebrate in Arabic
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, they write the names of football players that
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 behind them in the Arabic language.
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, these ways can be led to preserve minority
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, there are huge benefits in spread some
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, communication will be easier than before.
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, in the international forums, they always have spoken in English, and
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In addition
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 to that, most international arguments write in English
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, and
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 makes all the arguments clear.
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, the spread of some
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scientists to do their best in
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. In conclusion, I believe that the countries are proud of their
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, and they must ensure to protect their
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 and that the language is a part of their culture.
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