As languages such as English, Spanish and Mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a fear that many minority languages may die out. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages.

There is no doubt that these days some
languages
become more widely spoken. The question is, is it necessary that some countries are afraid
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spreading these
languages
and they must protect their own
languages
? In
this
essay, I am going to write my opinion and draw my own conclusion. In terms of advantages, there are some governments
have
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taken serious steps to protect their
languages
. The main reason given to support
this
claim is that because some
the
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languages
have a vast history and social links,some governments fear the extinction of their
languages
. To illustrate, the government of Saudi Arabia have taken good steps to protect their Arabic
languages
by putting a day to celebrate in Arabic
languages
although
, they write the names of football players that
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behind them in the Arabic language.
In other words
, these ways can be led to preserve minority
languages
.
However
, there are huge benefits in spread some
languages
.
Firstly
, communication will be easier than before.
In other words
, in the international forums, they always have spoken in English, and
this
makes the contact with other people very helpful.
In addition
to that, most international arguments write in English
languages
, and
this
makes all the arguments clear.
Secondly
, the spread of some
languages
could
be
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scientists to do their best in
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. In conclusion, I believe that the countries are proud of their
languages
, and they must ensure to protect their
languages
and that the language is a part of their culture.
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