Computer are increasingly used in education. In which areas do you think are computers more important and in which areas are teachers more important?

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education
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computer
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is debatable and
it’s
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usage is becoming popular day by day. Many people think it is replacing
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teachers
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duty, but
still
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teachers
are
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inseparable
part
of
educations
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. In some areas like in theoretical
parts
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computers
are more useful whereas
teachers
have a great role in
others area
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other areas
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like practical
education
.
To begin
with,
computers
replaced the
teachers
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duty
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in some cases including theoretical
parts
. Nowadays,
theoretical
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study is become
more easy
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by using modern technology.
Computers
have more memory than
teachers
resulting in it can
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more information related to a topic compared to masters which makes
student
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to
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understand any topic more easily. For
this
now
students
tend to use
computers
in theoretical subjects more and more which
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lead to turn
computers
more important in
this
field.
For example
, human beings have a limited brain to provide data on a topic while
computers
have a huge memory with
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of e-books, references books and dictionary
provided
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that more right information on a subject.
Hence
, it used more theoretical fields
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compared to
teachers
today. 
On the other hand
,
teachers
are still inseparable
part
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practical fields where
computers
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usage
are
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less. In
this
field,
teachers
have to teach their
students
by
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hand to hand.
This
is
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vital and hard
part
of
education
where
students
can’t learn by using modern technology like
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a computer
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computer
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computers
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. On mistake in
this
part
can make a
huge
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detrimental effect on
students
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students'
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and teacher’s
life
as well as
society
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. Because in
this
parts
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,
students
have to acquire knowledge practically and put it
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their professional
career
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. If they learn any wrong things and used
it
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them
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on
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their professional
life
can destroy their whole career and
others
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life
. So,
teachers
have to teach their
students
strictly.
For instance
, a medical student
have
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to learn information about operation system from working
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a
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expert
pedical
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medical
practitioner
in
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a long time. He/she can’t learn
about
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how to do
a
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operation by using
computer
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the computer
a computer
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.
Therefore
,
teachers
are still more important in practical sectors.  In conclusion,
students
used
computers
today in many cases of their
education
life
. In some
parts
, it is more valuable than
teachers
.
This
essay discussed in which cases
computers
are more noteworthy than
teachers
and
also
where
teachers
are more pivotal.
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