Computer are increasingly used in education. In which areas do you think are computers more important and in which areas are teachers more important?

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education

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computer

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is debatable and

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usage is becoming popular day by day. Many people think it is replacing

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teachers

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. In some areas like in theoretical

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are more useful whereas

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have a great role in

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like practical

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replaced the

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teachers

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duty

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in some cases including theoretical

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. Nowadays,

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study is become

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by using modern technology.

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have more memory than

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resulting in it can

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more information related to a topic compared to masters which makes

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understand any topic more easily. For

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now

students

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tend to use

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in theoretical subjects more and more which

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lead to turn

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more important in

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field.

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, human beings have a limited brain to provide data on a topic while

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have a huge memory with

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of e-books, references books and dictionary

provided

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that more right information on a subject.

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compared to

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today.

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are still inseparable

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practical fields where

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computers

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usage

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less. In

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field,

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have to teach their

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where

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can’t learn by using modern technology like

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computer

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can make a

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detrimental effect on

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students

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and teacher’s

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students

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have to acquire knowledge practically and put it

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into

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their professional

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. If they learn any wrong things and used

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their professional

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can destroy their whole career and

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life

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. So,

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have to teach their

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strictly.

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to learn information about operation system from working

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expert

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medical

practitioner

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a long time. He/she can’t learn

about

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how to do

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operation by using

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teachers

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are still more important in practical sectors. In conclusion,

students

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used

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today in many cases of their

education

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life

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. In some

parts

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, it is more valuable than

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essay discussed in which cases

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and

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where

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are more pivotal.

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Aug 4, 2022

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