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smoking in public places should be banned. to what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Nowadays smoking is a status symbol and people enjoy doing it everywhere. There should be a strict restriction to smoke in public places
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 as parks ,bus stands or site of common utility as people of all ages uses these facilities . I completely agree with the statement as even passive smoking can have disastrous effects on the health of an individual.
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 ,smoking in public places exposes even the persons who are not doing it.
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 ,in common facilities ,areas some of the individuals might be having an asthmatic problem or breathing trouble.
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 of smoke fumes, these issues get aggravated . Another point to consider is that it is not beneficial for society.
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,it aggravates the problem of environmental pollution and the craving of other sections of society to follow these steps.
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 , if a kid observes someone smoking, he tries to imitate the act.
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, passive smoking can
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 result in an increase in heart problems and incidences of heart attacks. On the packet of cigarettes only , it is mentioned that smoking kills and is injurious to health.Even doctors forbid newborns and geriatric patients to avoid these zone. To conclude ,smoking is not a fashion to be followed publicly . It should be restricted to smoking areas or specified locations if a person has a strong desire to do. I feel
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 issue should be dealt with seriously and penalties should be imposed so as to have a healthy civilized society and to get the best out of our younger generations.
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