It is impossible to help all people around the world in need so governments should focus on people from their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often

suggestiong

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suggesting

to

regime

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should pay all

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attention

atention

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attention

to provide own

people

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people's

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vital needs

instead

of

strive

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for another

nation

because it is not possible to always help all folks around the globe.

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notion seems to be true as

positive

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key to

help

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all continents. To commence with, several issues that should require all

concenteration

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concentration

concentrations

of the authority in every country rather than on other continent's problem.

First

and foremost,

underdevelped

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underdeveloped

countries have almost insufficient funds for catering to their massives. If their focus on other

need

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, their people face

to

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several

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consequences

concequences

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consequences

of

this

practice.

For instance

,

brundi

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Burundi

branding

Brandi

is the

first

on the list of

ontherdeveloped

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other developed

on the developed

nation

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nations

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that always struggling to provide proper

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facilities

facilites

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facilities

such

as education,health and tourism.

Consequently

,

this

type of underprivileged

are

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unable to help others.

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Furthermore

Furthemore

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Furthermore

, taxpayers pay taxes to the regime for the development of their country. So they have

right

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to access all services and improvements as

the

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priority

instead

to assist

another provinces

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another province

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.

Moreover

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if the high authorities give

prefrence

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preference

to their

nation

, it will not bring benefits to the

economoy

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economy

of

homeland

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but

also

make countries capable to help other groups. To cite an example, If the

youngesters

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youngsters

get a better

educations

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education

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, health services and proper support,

as a result

, they become

more

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efficient

citizen

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citizens

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which eventually contributes to the prosperity of the

nation

.

Hence

every

soverreign

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sovereign

should

gives

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segnificance

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significance

to its population. in conclusion, governments should pay all attention to

provide

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their

nation

proper needs as develops their country and it is right for all citizen

paying

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to pay

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taxes to

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receive

recive

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receive

vital facilities and services to become

good

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a good

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citizen and be helper

other

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nation

.