Many students find it difficult to pay attention at school. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

There is a growing concern about

students

who are suffering from

lack

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of concentration at

schools

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school

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, they find it hard to pay attention to their teachers. It cannot be surprising that given issues

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attracted many heated debates because of

its

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their

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impact on the

students

. In

this

essay

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I tend to discuss the major cause relating to

this

topic

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and try to suggest some possible solutions to overcome

this

disturbing problem. As a starting point of discussion, let us examine how having bad eating

habit

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is one of the most important causes which has been derived from the mentioned issue. Some scientists point out that: you are what you eat,

therefore

the more

students

choose fast foods, the drowsier they would become.

Also

eating healthy foods which have all nutritions that

body

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needs brings energy for them.

Moreover

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the lack of a sleeping pattern is another

causes

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which

leads

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to

give

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an issue, without having enough sleeping time,

mind

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the mind

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could not concentrate so they find

classroom

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the classroom

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a place to

napping

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. There can be many solutions to tackle

this

problem, perhaps the best way is

changing

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students

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students'

student's

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lifestyle

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lifestyles

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. Having

good

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lifestyle

to promote

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promotes

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discipline in

whole

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aspect of their life,

as a

result

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de will obey your slipping pattern, sleeping and waking at

the

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specific time

also

they must

following

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follow

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a balanced diet doing exercises regularly to

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in

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their mind and

increased

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their concentration. In conclusion, the problem of difficulties to pay attention at schools could be sensibly and easily tackled if the above measures are taken into consideration.