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Many students find it difficult to pay attention at school. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

#students #attention #school
There is a growing concern about
students
 who are suffering from
lack
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 of concentration at
schools
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, they find it hard to pay attention to their teachers. It cannot be surprising that given issues
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 attracted many heated debates because of
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 impact on the
students
. In
this
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 I tend to discuss the major cause relating to
this
 topic
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 and try to suggest some possible solutions to overcome
this
 disturbing problem. As a starting point of discussion, let us examine how having bad eating
habit
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 is one of the most important causes which has been derived from the mentioned issue. Some scientists point out that: you are what you eat,
therefore
 the more
students
 choose fast foods, the drowsier they would become.
Also
 eating healthy foods which have all nutritions that
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 needs brings energy for them.
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 the lack of a sleeping pattern is another
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 which
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 to
give
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 an issue, without having enough sleeping time,
mind
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 could not concentrate so they find
classroom
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 a place to
napping
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. There can be many solutions to tackle
this
 problem, perhaps the best way is
changing
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students
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students'
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lifestyle
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. Having
good
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 lifestyle
to promote
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 discipline in
whole
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 aspect of their life,
as a
result
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 de will obey your slipping pattern, sleeping and waking at
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 specific time
also
 they must
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 a balanced diet doing exercises regularly to
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in
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their mind and
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 their concentration. In conclusion, the problem of difficulties to pay attention at schools could be sensibly and easily tackled if the above measures are taken into consideration.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • concentration
  • attention span
  • distractions
  • technology
  • boredom
  • tiredness
  • engagement
  • learning disabilities
  • teaching techniques
  • classroom size
  • family issues
  • health problems
  • motivational strategies
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