A neighbor has damaged your car while parking his/her vehicle in the lane in front of your house. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter explain why you are writing describe the damage to your car and express your feelings about it recommend what steps he/she should take to resolve the situation.

Dear Mr John, I am writing to express my depression about the minor
accident
caused by you
while
resting the car in front of my house. I am staying in flat number:83, which is near the parking lane. Yesterday, there was an
accident
done by you
and
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damaged my
car
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front bumper.
This
is
due to
the carelessness of reverse parking. My vehicle bumper was completely broken
as well
as
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the right-side indicator was not functioning properly.
Last
night, I was depressed and could not able to sleep. It is a present from my grandmother on my birthday, so it is emotionally attached to me. I reported
this
issue to the Dubai police department for applying a claim with the insurance company
as well as
informed them about the place of the
accident
along with
our vehicle registration number. you will receive a call from the transport department
for verifying
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the vehicle number and to get an acknowledgement from you that you are responsible for
this
accident
. Kindly attend the call from the respective department which
helps
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me to initiate the claim process with my insurance company. I am looking for your immediate response on
this
. Technology development improved drastically beyond its
limit
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limits
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,especially in social media. Few
people
feel that it is distracting the
adult
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in their personal
life
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,but others believe that it has a great advantage
to make
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in making
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the young generation a group.In my opinion,social media development always grabs
people
's opportunities away from them. Art is a form of human creation which
represent
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people
's thinking. Technology development is a major factor in
rise
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of social media users. Technology has evolved a lot in terms of providing flexibility for
people
. Certainly, love plays a vital role
to lead
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in leading
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a peaceful life. It helps us understand each other
as well as
promotes our lives without a major quarrel.
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, my cousin married a girl whom he
knew
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for more than 3 years, and he felt that she could be the perfect partner.
In addition
, love gives an opportunity to understand each other. Long-time affection helps a person to learn more about another person. Love is unavoidable and cannot be resisted between
people
. In recent days, most
people
wants
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to live a
luxury
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life Yours Sincerely, Albert
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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