At all times,
children
spend a lot of
time
studying at
school
, while interacting with
teachers
.
Thus
, some people believe that excellent
teachers
can contribute to
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children
's development more than excellent
parents
.
However
, I would disagree with
this
opinion and will give more details about it.
First
of all,
parents
are the people who will stay together with their
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till they become adults. During
this
long period of
time
,
parents
educate
children
, especially while
children
are very young. Caregivers not only teach the
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but
also
nourish the
right
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. Meanwhile, at
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and their progress
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thinking.
For example
, in my country's elementary schools, there are no subjects
such
as etiquette or
right
values or even self-care. The classrooms are crowded,
thus
, the main goal for the teacher is to present their lecture.
Therefore
, the biggest influence on
children
's development comes from
parents
.
Secondly
, at
school
children
mostly are taught
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subjects or arts. These subjects rarely affect
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thinking or
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outlook towards
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life, friendships or
with different people.
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,
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is only expanding knowledge or gaining
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calculating, writing,
readingCorrect word choice
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. Those
skills
can definitely be taught by
parents
at home.
Moreover
,
children
spend only half of the day at
school
and the rest of the
time
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communication and some soft-
skills
learning from
parents
.
To summarize, in my opinion, great
parents
are more important than
teachers
for
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development, because
children
spend the most
time
with caregivers, who can not only develop
child
's hard
skills
,
such
as maths, reading or writing, but as well as some soft
skills
, like well manners, behaviour,
right
values pack. I believe
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that
parents
are the most honest and superior
teachers
, affecting and developing
child'sCorrect article usage
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brain.