It has been stated that as every citizen should have an equal opportunity to follow higher
education
, the government should allow
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all
students
to attend
colleges
and
universities
free of charge.
However
, governments should assume the burden
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, I take the view that it can bring many benefits for both individuals and
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society as
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.
Some people are of the opinion that governments should invest more money in
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instead
of providing college and university free of charge. To commence, with many learners being not interested in educating and being unwilling to educate an academic path, the
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governments’Correct your spelling
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budget will be
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a waste of money. To clarify, if
governmentAdd an article
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make more budget for
colleges
and
universities
, they should shoulder the heavy burden of financing
universities
. On top of that, with many citizens facing different problems in
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society,
governmentAdd an article
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should allocate more amount of money to spend on more infrastructures and important areas of public services
such
as providing
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reliable public transport and other communications means, public health care services
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for senior, as well as recreational facilities for the entire society
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merely the university student.
However
, governments should take more
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onChange preposition
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colleges
and
universities
owning to all
students
, the advantages of
this
issue outweigh its disadvantages.
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and foremost,
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many talented
students
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in
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,
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significant financial challenges,
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not affordable to pay tuition fees for following their
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, which can inevitably force them to give up their
aspirationFix the agreement mistake
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and
education
. If they are not obliged to pay tuition fees, they can pursue their
education
without any concerns and concentrate on their studies in order to cultivate natural talents regarding
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financial matters.
For example
, a lot of
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and reputation musicians
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could realize the untapped
their Correct pronoun usage
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potential but
also
,
they Correct pronoun usage
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could flourish their talent only by pursuing their
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.
Likewise
, only through
universities
and
colleges
can
students
get acquired valuable
softenReplace the word
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skills
such
as communication skills and intellectual skills.
Besides
, many job vacancies and
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are employed knowledgeable post-graduation, so
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it is logical
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everyone
hasCorrect subject-verb agreement
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access to free college and university
education
.
In conclusion,
Although
this
approach can negative
impactsFix the agreement mistake
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on governments’
budget Fix the agreement mistake
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, I reaffirm my idea because
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all
students
have the right to get hold of good access to higher
education
opportunities no matter what their financial status is.