Some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partners. Discuss both systems and state which you think is better.
Occurs that in some countries, marriages are organized by the parents
while
on the other
hand
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hand,
people
choose their own partners. I want to believe both
statements are true but in my opinion, I would like to say it is more
ideal for Correct quantifier usage
apply
people
to choose a spouse since they would spend the rest of their lives with one another. This
would be addressed in the paragraph below.
I would say people
who choose their spouse tend to enjoy every bit of their love life as they would
understand the Verb problem
apply
weakness
and strengths of each other. Fix the agreement mistake
weaknesses
For instance
, from the point of being just mere friends and growing to something more intimate. during this
process, there would be a tendency of visiting
and Change preposition
to visit
going
on lunch and dinner dates with each other, so doing Wrong verb form
go
would
improve their relationship and give room to prompt communication between Rephrase
so would
both
parties. As there won't be an awkward moment between them. The most interesting part is that it strengthens their bond even before and after the wedding.
Meanwhile, marriages that are arranged by parents happen to have a problem in future as both
parties are a novice to what the respective partners want or like to do or don't. For example
, You are introduced to getting married to someone with the qualities you have vowed not to have a friendship with let alone live with for the rest of yours. That's the first reason for a failed marriage when you are not getting what you have been dreaming to have
. Another instance is that there won't be smooth communication between Change preposition
of having
both
spouses and when there is no communication there is no way the marriage would survive. Marriages like this
often lead to single parents and divorce.
In conclusion, I would say allowing people
to choose their life partners would limit the rate at which divorce is rampant. It would also
limit extramarital affairs as well as
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task response
Make sure to address all aspects of the task and provide a balanced view of both systems.
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