In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Could this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society?

In the various countries

on

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over the world

in

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nowadays, the percentage of

senior

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citizen

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is regularly

rose

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. In my opinion, I believe

this

trend

brings more negative

aspects

than positive

aspects

. On the one hand, when the proportion of elder people is progressively,

then

the young generations

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will

brings

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burden

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on their

shoulder

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related to

taxpayer

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and

pensioner

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.

Firstly

, If the pensioner is more than the

taxpayer

, it will lead to pressure comes on the youth which results in

an

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unstable

financial

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. In china which

the

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highest

population

over

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the world,

for example

, the percentage of

senior

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a senior

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citizen is more than

young

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generation,

this

mean

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that it created

lead

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to financial crisis and put

an

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unnecessary on the youth when they have to burden

on

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money from

taxpayer

for older people.

As a result

,

this

will lead to unbalance related to

population

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the population

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for

this countries

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and its almost between

taxpayer

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and retired

person

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.

On the other hand

,

this

trend

also

has

a positive

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a positive aspect

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aspects

when the young generations are

guidanced

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guided

guidance

by senior citizens who rich experiments in various fields.

To begin

with, there are

centain

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certain

the

population

of geriatric who are contribute largely for financial

growing

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billionaire

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over the world,

for instance

,

he

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belong

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to

geriatric

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population

, but he

have

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been provided various knowledge

such

as science, technology

or

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financial economy for the young generation,

these

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him

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knowledge is usefully for the

youth

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understanding

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clearly in one of

this

field. In conclusion,

although

, the advantage of

this

trend

can provide

an

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valuable experiment for the young generations from senior citizens.

Conversely

, the budget of

nation

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play

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an

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crucial role in the development of one country.

Therefore

,

this

trend

bring

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more drawbacks

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outweigh

outweight

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outweigh

the positive

aspects

because

the

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unbalance between

taxpayer

and pensioner.