The world environment problem cannot be solved by odinary people. Government and large companies should be responsible for it. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Environmental
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The environmental
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issue
, which has become
the
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a
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mammoth
issue
, might be solved by strict
law
;
nevertheless
, it is believed by
few
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a few
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masses that the local public cannot handle the international
climate
issue
, and it is
duty
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the duty
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of the policymakers and big firms to control
this
issue
.I,
however
,agree with
this
statement and will explicate reasons for it. To commence with, there are numerous arguments which support
this
idea, perhaps the
prominent
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most prominent
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is “imposing strict
law
” until the lawmakers not
introducing
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the
law
that
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apply
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against
the
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apply
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cutting trees and jungles for construction works, the
climate
issue
will not solve.
Moreover
, these kinds of
law
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laws
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solely the government can amply due having authority.
For instance
, in
Japan
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,Japan
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the local authorities create
law
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laws
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and make mandatory to plant
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a tree
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tree
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trees
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in every house and
that is
the reason Japan comes in
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the world
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world
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world's
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top ten finest
environment
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environments
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list.
As a result
, saving trees can be beneficial to tackle
with
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apply
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this
problem.
Besides
this
, another reason worth
to mention
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mentioning
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here is, “promoting green energy ” To elaborate
it
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apply
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, if giant organisations
use
less
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fewer
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plastic products in their product, it leads to less pollution in
country
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the country
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.
Finally
, it
also
enticed more and more humans towards it.
For instance
, “The Times Of India” newspaper reveals that a big cell phone firm in
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apply
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America
cutoff
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cut off
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all plastic
product
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products
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in their phone in order to eliminate the
climate
problem. Thereby, promoting plastic less product by the huge organisation can be benefited in
reduce
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reducing
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environmental
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the environmental
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issue
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issues
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. On the flip side, it is not only the
authorities
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authority's
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or big
firms
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firms'
firm's
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duty to solve
these obstacle
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this obstacle
these obstacles
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but mankind
also
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is also
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equally responsible. When human beings
use
less
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fewer
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private automobiles,
then
toxic pollution will reduce because private
vehicle
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vehicles
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play
major
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a major
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role in
damaging
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the damaging
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environment
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the environment
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.
Hence
, it is
prove
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proven
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that
climate
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the climate
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can be protected if humans
not
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do not
did not
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use
their vehicles. To conclude,
Although
the administration and large organisations can be solved these
issue
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issues
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via
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by
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introducing strict
rule
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rules
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and promoting green energy, it is
also
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the
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locals
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locals'
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duty to not
use
environmental
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environmentally
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harmful products.
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