One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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as buildings and offices are now built with an

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design.

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it can be argued that having constructions built with an

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design is beneficial, I still believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages, and

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is a negative development. There are two main reasons why people might believe that

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is a positive development.

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, the relationships between

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might be better.

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is because working in an

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area brings

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closer together physically, breaking down the invisible wall between people.

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,

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can interact with their colleagues more easily, making it more approachable.

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, it might have positive effects on the collaboration between colleagues. As

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closer together, they have better communication and interaction with each other.

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benefits

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with a better flow of information, resulting in better management for managers. Despite the above arguments, I still believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

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, working together in an

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area might lead to

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lack of privacy. Since workers sit

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to each other,

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of their actions might be observed by their colleagues. Sometimes, work is sensitive, and being able to see everyone’s screen might be disruptive.

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, working in an

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area might lead to greater distractions. Working close to each other without walls to separate people can be noisy and chaotic, especially in call

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.

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results in the fact that

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can’t focus on their work, decreasing their efficiency.

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, it might end up

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a higher risk of diseases spreading.

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is because

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work fairly close to each other, so the chance of an infectious disease spreading might be very high. In conclusion,

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there are benefits of open-plan design, I still believe that

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is a negative development, and the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.