Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use?
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Teaching children about what is right and what is wrong is an essential part of their upbringing. I totally agree that punishment is the only way to persuade kids about the
consequence
related to their actions. Fix the agreement mistake
consequences
This
essay will discuss why strictness is required and how moral values can be inculcated in young ones.
Firstly
, at an early age, it is difficult to persuade a child about his or her wrongdoings through communication. Initially
, children are not mature enough to understand the seriousness of their actions. At this
stage, what works well is the harshness of guardians as they are well known for their dependency on elders in the family. A perfect example is my cousin, she once stole money from her mother's purse for buying ice cream. When her mother realised this
, she slapped her and scolded her severely. Since that moment she never attempted to steal again. Thus
, severeness is required to discipline offspring.
Secondly
, there should be a few limited ways to penalise kids or else the extreme harshness can affect their mental and physical well-being over the years. Although
parents know well how to control their young ones, they can discipline their children by not allowing them to do their favourite thing at the moment. On the other hand
, mentors can make their pupils stand or assist teachers throughout the class. For instance
, one of my friend's young one is given such
treatment for her wrongdoing and it works well. She understands that if she misbehaves, she might have to address the severity of elders. Hence
, in spite of handling them harshly, we can prolong and repeat a few simple punishments to discipline them.
To sum up
, according to
me, punishment is a must so as to guide and nurture future adults to some extent. However
, severe behaviour might affect their mental development.Submitted by schoudhary.sc10 on
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