Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent eleswhere. To what extent to you agree with this veiw?
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idea, perhaps the prominent one is " free education
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at zero cost, it will help to enhance the literacy rate in the country, because, educations' are highly expensive and therefore
, humans not get proper academic knowledge. Japan could be an ideal example here, they enhance the literacy rate in their nation by giving free high school and university education
. As a result
, spending money
on education
would be benefited for nation more than museums
.
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although
spending money
on museums
is beneficial in terms of maintaining old historical items, if the authority accesses these funds on constructing roads
and providing free education
, it will be more beneficial.Submitted by riyazpopatiya9 on
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