Some people say that the best way to improve health is by increasing the number of health facilities.Others,However,say that this woud have little effect on public health and that other measure are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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into consideration ,especially where there are larger populations. Meanwhile, a few numbers of individuals are of the view that

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the best way to enhance

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is by increasing the

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of

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facilities

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whilst others see it as a waste of time rather

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other measures are required.

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will elaborate on both views and my opinion will be defined.

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considered paramount regardless of age, status and tribe. Having a healthy life is something wonderful anyone could ever seek for. Having quite a large

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of

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is of

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good benefits

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in a city where there is many populations having smaller

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facilities facilities

will lead to frequent death rates,

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won't get easy access due to lack of

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satisfaction will be at a lower rate. Having

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structures will create more space for

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to be attended

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admitted if need be. A patient who needs to get treated requires a conducive and beautiful environment because it impacts a positive

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in turn improves mental State.

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facility

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have different divisions

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as emergency room, labour room, specialist section and so on .

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, quality healthcare providers should be employed for adequate and effective care.

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, providing sports

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such

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as gym centres, football ,

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centre and etcetera remedy obesity and other underlying

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conditions

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means that

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will engage more on physical exercise in other to keep fit and stay healthy . Creating awareness

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healthy

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a better measure to enhance

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provide a team that will supervise

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certain foods

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in other not to invite more illness to the body system. In conclusion, having a quality and a large

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of

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facilities

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providing other proficient measures to promote

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is of importance. With good ,

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more life will be saved and

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will get attention and satisfaction.