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ith the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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The two diagrams illustrate the current and the proposed modifications for a house building. Overall, it is clear that the plan is to extend the living room at the expense of the hallway.
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, the kitchen will have some changes, the entrance changed and get new furniture. According to the proposal, the backside exit of the food room and the main entrance gate will remain from the original plan site. while the most significant development will be the extension of the living room in the westerly direction, where it will overtake the hall by removing the eastern wall as well as the two back hall doors will be diminished.
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, the stairs design will change, and move to the north.
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 the storage under it will be removed completely. The kitchen will be renovated by adding new kitchen furniture and changing the north single door which opened in the hallway to be a double door on the south side of the same wall and directly after the main entrance gate.
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