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Some people think it is better to have many short holidays during the year. Others believe it would be beneficial to have fewer, longer vacations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Having many short holidays during the
year
 or fewer but longer
vocations
,both of them,in the
end
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 are
vacotions
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vacations
 that all of us have
neccesary
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necessary
 to take during a
year
,
furthemore
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furthermore
,when you have been working nonstop.In my
opinion
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 I will prefer to have many short holidays during the
year
 for two reasons which I will explain in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
,for
everyone
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 it is
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necessary
neccesary
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necessary
 to take some
days
 away from the routine and to enjoy them with their family.But,not in every
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case
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cases
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 it is possible.
For instance
this
year
 I started a new job
to
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 the most important company in our place and
this
 is wonderful for me.But,
on the other hand
,the
days
 through the law that I can take were just 5
days
.So,three of them I consumed to prepare for my exam and two of them to pass with my family.I
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choose
chose
choos
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chose
 to go in
this
 way because both of them are so important
for
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 me.And in
these
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this manner
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manner
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 I choose to do short
vocations
in
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at
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 different times.
Secondly
,by taking short
vocations
 you will have the
oppurtunity
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opportunity
 to not create a big spare with your job.When you back there are
not
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no
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 big
differents
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different
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with
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from
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that
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what
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 you have left before you went.
For example
,when I take
vocations
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vocation
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 two
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or
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ore
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or
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 three
days
,I can't stay more because everything
back
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is back
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 in a routine for me.I prefer to enjoy these
days
 and in other vocation to change the destinations. So to conclude,I prefer to have short
vocations
,so in
this
manner
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 I will enjoy more them.In
this
manner
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 I will distribute during the
year
 according to my
neccesities
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necessities
.
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