Some people argue that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others believe that it is better to try, and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have different ideas about whether it is good to accept unpleasant conditions that
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them or
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better to allow room for some improvement. While embracing
such
situation
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is ideal because one has no control over
such
events it is optimum to welcome some changes for betterment. Many people give in to several unfavourable conditions that
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to
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their way
in
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because they cannot prevent those events. An example is the death of a child, a husband or a parent. Since
this
issue is an unforeseen occurrence, individuals have
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control over it,
therefore
they try to overcome their pain and move on with
life
. Grieving for a whole lifetime can cause a person
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emotional distress and depression which is a lifelong disability. Another instance is looking for a suitable job, due to lack of skills or adequate education, people are compelled to accept whatever employment opportunity
that is
available. These individuals need to put food on the table for their families and
also
provide other basic needs
such
as medical care and education for their family members and
hence
, have no choice. Unsatisfactory jobs
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impact
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workers
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life
negatively.
On the other hand
, it is crucial to make
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and
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life
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.
This
will mean learning from one’s mistakes.
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, when you are thrown out of your rented property because of not paying rent due to
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of money, thinking of finding a job to ameliorate in
life
will bring changes and lift you out of
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poverty
povety
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poverty
. Correcting oneself can lead to total
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. In conclusion, we may give in
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unpleasant situation in
life
because is beyond our limit, but turning around is the best decision
to
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our total wellbeing.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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