Some people argue that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others believe that it is better to try, and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different ideas about whether it is good to accept unpleasant conditions that
befalls
them or Change the verb form
befall
is
better to allow room for some improvement. While embracing Change the verb form
are
such
situation
is ideal because one has no control over Correct article usage
a situation
such
events it is optimum to welcome some changes for betterment.
Many people give in to several unfavourable conditions that comes
Change the verb form
come
to
their way Change preposition
apply
in
Change preposition
of
live
because they cannot prevent those events. An example is the death of a child, a husband or a parent. Since Replace the word
life
this
issue is an unforeseen occurrence, individuals have Correct your spelling
no
not
control over it, Add the particle
tonot
therefore
they try to overcome their pain and move on with life
. Grieving for a whole lifetime can cause a person an
emotional distress and depression which is a lifelong disability. Another instance is looking for a suitable job, due to lack of skills or adequate education, people are compelled to accept whatever employment opportunity Remove the article
apply
that is
available. These individuals need to put food on the table for their families and also
provide other basic needs such
as medical care and education for their family members and hence
, have no choice. Unsatisfactory jobs are
impact Unnecessary verb
apply
on
Change preposition
apply
workers
Change noun form
workers'
worker's
life
negatively.
On the other hand
, it is crucial to make improvement
and Fix the agreement mistake
improvements
do
some corrections Unnecessary verb
apply
life
. Change preposition
in life
This
will mean learning from one’s mistakes. For example
, when you are thrown out of your rented property because of not paying rent due to lack
of money, thinking of finding a job to ameliorate in Correct article usage
a lack
life
will bring changes and lift you out of Correct your spelling
poverty
povety
. Correcting oneself can lead to total Correct your spelling
poverty
wellbeing
.
In conclusion, we may give in Correct your spelling
well-being
for
unpleasant situation in Change preposition
to
life
because is beyond our limit, but turning around is the best decision to
our total wellbeing.Change preposition
for
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